(This is the second post in my Carnita series. Links to #1 and #3 below.)
I’ve been stalking Carnita because she’s practically famous for her new porn travelogue and it kills me. How can a writer care nothing for sentence structure? She doesn’t even proofread her work. But still she sells a steady stream of words ejaculated onto the page, while I agonize and judge. Her alphabet isn’t the same as mine. My fingers dry up clumsy above the keyboard while letters cream out of her, each story a lubricant sucked up by her audience, morsels of lust consumed one page at a time. Do I have to be graphic to be successful? Is metaphor lost to the modern mind? Wherefore art thou poetry? Porn feels like the writing End Times to me, but for Carnita its all Rapture. These are the things I’m thinking about while she plans her book tour.
First stop Germany where she will eat meat. She’s never been much of a meat eater. Meat could change her, give her some kind of insatiable craving, keep her awake at night. After a year of pinning wings on mermaids, she’s planning to surprise her fans with bratwurst and the erection of Eltz Castle, sharp spires poking through the canopy in a fairytale piercing of the musk and fur of the forest. The cooking lesson was her dress rehearsal, a precious whisper of instructions, ingredients artfully arrayed on a marble table, nostrils splayed by the viscous scent, long muscles fermented dark beside pink mounds of flesh. Her fingers wander instinctively, fire dancing through pheromones of the ancients, swans entwined on the Moselle, neck around neck in effortless union, slithering smooth between peaks, salt and blood, the taste of glory.
Meanwhile I sulk in a swirl of single malt. Carnita, made and maker. Her exhibition slays me. She becomes her story, milling food into pornography, water into wine, the high priestess of loins marking intimacy as stations of the cross, stigmata cherry on her palms, guiltless deep throat witness reporting on deviant pleasures. She took the lesson seriously, the slice, grind and roll, dew trickling between her shoulders, shining oil on swollen veins, kneading hands cupping flesh to fill limp stockings until a delicate stiffness gives purpose to the exercise, and though raw as fruit, she puts it in her mouth, pushing against her tongue, her own muscles rippling to dominate, stay in control, swallow.
I choke back a gasp, suck scotch from my ice cubes, scribble a few notes on Goethe and food poisoning. Did I really just watch Carnita eat raw meat? Could I mimic her instinct for fantasy? Could I inhale the bestial terroir of alpine pastures and exhale bare skin quivering in the Black Forest? Probably not. Licking juice from her fingers, a froth of mead on her lips, she’s a natural, totally absorbed in the act of encasing, enclosing, engorging one animal with another, a milkmaid with grass stains on her back and a whip in her hand. Yet, I aspire to her greatness.
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6 thoughts on “The Cooking Lesson (Carnita #2)”
Okay, I am clueless or live in a void. I only know that Carnitas are delicious little pieces of meat we use in Mexican food. I shall hencforth “google” or suck scotch from ice cubes myself until I find out who this “Carnitas” is.
Hi, Kelley — I introduced Carnita in a previous post. https://billiebest.com/2019/11/06/professional-jealousy/ She is my imaginary friend who becomes successful by writing pornography while I struggle to be literary. Yes, carnitas are little pieces of spicy meat, plural. Carnita, singular.
How dare she venture into the world of food, with all that porn sensibility and no, well, “real” understanding of it.
I know, that’s the point.
Yes, how dare she. Porn is not a qualification for everything. So glad you enjoyed the read.
I had to look up: pheromones. And your hair. Your hair in that photo. Unreal great.
Yeah, pheromones. It’s why the smell of your cat’s fur makes you feel good, scents connected to our brain, my dog’s ears are a drug for me.